The Poor Condition of Bus Transjakarta

Hey Guys!
Well, Now, Im gonna talking about my own opinion when for the first time i used Bus Tranjakarta a.k.a Busway to explore The Metropolitan City a.k.a Jakarta :)

Well, honestly, I made a text. This text called by Recount Text. This was told by me to my english teacher at school that's 8 Senior High School (SMAN 8 TANGERANG). This was my task when i was at grade 1. The goals is to know my ability in speaking.

So, please take a look!

The Poor Condition of Bus Transjakarta

Well, Bus Transjakarta is a public transportation which we always call it by "Busway". Busway is an alternative way to avoid the traffic stuck. But, the society includes me feel not very satisfied with the condition of Busway. The condition is very poor. For the first poor condition we can take a look at the bus shelter. The condition of the bus shelter isn't maintained. Then, the glass wall full of sticker, advertising brocures, advertising sticker. And then, the bridge as a communicator makes the people afraid to get across. And the passengers don't line up neatly. So, it makes all passengers dont feel comfort with it. Actually, i saw the officer, but, he didn't do anything. He didn't manage the passengers who didnt line up neatly. I think he is not responsible with his job. 

Second, it's about the condition of the busway. So, when the busway come in, the passengers were scrambling to get in into the bus. Then the officer is confused to manage the passengers who were trying to get in it. Finally, the bus began so crowded, full of the passengers. They were thrust, encourage each other to get the comfort spot. And about the facility in the busway, AC was broken, sometimes AC is getting warm or not too cool. A speaker for give the information about the the next bus shelter, in fact, didn't work very well. Then, the eldery passengers and woman pregnants couldn't sit on the chair because the chair was already full and crowded. And, the last problem is about the other public transportation (such as taxi, kopaja, etc) still cut or be brave to get in into the way that it is only way for the Busway. And not just the public transportation. So do the people who still be brave to get across in it. In fact, the across bridge is not far from them. 

In my own opinion, the government must fix the problems, then they must uphold the rules that they made. I suggest, the government must give the strong punishment for whom break the rules. Because, it makes the people be wary and not do it anymore. If everything about the public transportation runs well, it will make the society feels comfort and pleased. They surely loved to used Busway or another public transportation. So, many advantage that we can get!